Dear [Mother's Denim Jacket],
We have had two editors look at your story, and we are afraid we must take a pass on this one. Some of the comments were:
"Unlikable narrator stops me from wanting to read on."
"Good consistent voice."
Hope this is helpful. No one likes getting rejections, but we feel a detailed and personal rejection is empowering and respectful to the author.
Thanks, mates. Sort of a roller coaster of rejection.